Cast :

Julie James : Jennifer Love Hewitt

Helen Shivers : Sarah Michelle Gellar

Barry Cox : Ryan Phillippe

Ray Bronson : Freddie Prinze Jr.

Missy Egan : Anne Heche

Ben Willis : Muse Watson

Elsa Shivers : Bridgette Wilson

Max : Johnny Galecki

Written By : Kevin Williamson

Directed By : Jim Gillespie

Transcribed By : Ryan Smith (1998)

EXT. - Camera pan over the ocean and around reapers curve. camera zeros in on a

man sitting on top of reapers curve holding a silver medallion that says "I love

you". The man is drinking. Fireworks are set off, it's the 4th of July.

EXT. - The croaker parade --- Floats are up and down the street and people are

cheering.

INT. The Croaker queen contest.---

MC -

That's got to be the prettiest girl we've ever had in this competition, I tell

you. Now let's welcome back our six finalists on stage, come on back out girls.

There they are, pretty as can be I tell ya. We're proud of you girls. you've

worked hard.

On the balcony. Barry Cox, Julie James and Ray Bronson are cheering on Helen

Shivers.

Julie -

Look at her she was born for this.

Ray -

I never knew her breasts were so, ample.

Barry -

She does these exercises to pump 'em up.

Julie -

Guys, I'm on sexist overdrive as it is, kill the commentary.

Back on stage MC -

Now in the spirit of Mother Teresa what will be your contribution to your

community and the world at large?

Helen -

Well Bob, at summer's end I plan to move to New York City where I will pursue a

career as a serious actress, it's my goal to entertain the world through

artistic expression, through art, I shall serve my country.

Back to the balcony

Ray -

Do you believe all this shit?

Barry -

Work it babe. Their eating it up, look she's incredible.

Back to stage MC -

And now. this years Croaker Queen is...Miss Helen Shivers

The crowd cheers as the announcers gives Helen her crown and scepter.

Barry -

That's my girlfriend, yeah!!!!

EXT. The streets of Southport --- On the street the song My Baby's Got The

Strangest Ways is being performed live by Southern Culture on the skids a

hundreds of locals are parting. Helen and Julie walk in.

Helen -

How's my hair?

Julie -

Hurricane proof.

Helen -

Hey, it's all about the hair don't you forget that. especially when you become

some big hot shot lawyer; those professional women types thinks its all about

brains and ability and completely ignore the do'.

Julie -

So the do's vital, got it.

Helen's sister Elsa appears.

Elsa -

Hey you riding with me?

Helen -

No tell mom I'll be home late.

Elsa -

Ah is little miss Croaker getting sauteed tonight?

Helen -

Oh a twit with a wit.

Elsa - Eat me.

Max runs up to Julie.

Max -

Hey Julie, I brought you a shooter on the house.

Julie -

Oh thanks Max but I have this mental block, can't get past the slime.

Max -

How about I take you out before you leave town, you know kind of a bon voyage.

Julie -

Ah you know, I don't think so.

Max -

We've been friends since forever, now you can't just leave without farewell

right?

Julie - Right.

Barry and Ray walk up. Barry takes the shooter from Max.

Barry -

A toast to us, to our last summer of immature, adolescent decadence.

He drinks the shooter.

Helen - Somebody's buzzed.

Barry (To Max) -

Yo chumbake, take a hike.

Barry then pushes Max to the ground and a fight breaks out. Ray pulls them

apart.

Helen -

Barry they're just friends.

Barry -

Okay Ray just taking care of your girl like I promised.

Ray -

Thanks, Buddy, now lets blow.

Helen -

Yeah okay, lets beam down to Dawson's beach. Enjoy a ride?

Julie (To Max) -

Bye.

EXT. Reapers curve --- Driving along the highway, driving very dangerously.

EXT. Southport beach --- The four friends are on the beach.

Ray -

So the boy and girl are making out right? When they hear over the radio that

this lunatic killer's escaped from an insane asylum, he gots this long sharp

hook for a hand.

Barry -

No, you're telling it wrong.

Ray -

Shut Up! So the girl, she gets all scared right? And the boy, all hot and

bothered, he gets pissed and peels out.

Barry -

No, no, no no. That's not the way it goes, okay the boy goes for help and the

girl stays in the car and she hears this scratching sound...

Helen (interrupting) -

It's not a scratching sound, it's a drip, drip, drip.

Barry -

No. its scratching because the guys been hung from a tree limb and his feet are

scratching on the roof of the car.

Helen -

No, he's been decapitated and it's the blood for his severed neck that's

dripping on the car going drip, drip, drip.

Julie -

No he wasn't decapitated, he was gutted with a hook. That's the way I heard it.

Ray -

You're all wrong, they get back to the girl's house and find the lunatic's bloody hook in the car door. Now that's the original story, that's the way it really happened.

Barry -

Hey, hey none of it really happened, it's a bullshit ghost story to begin with .

Ray -

No it's not, it's true.

Helen -

Yeah I don't think so Ray

Ray -

I swear it.

Julie -

Please, it's a fictional story created to warn young girls of the dangers of

having premarital sex.

Ray -

Well actually honey, and you know how terrified I am of your IQ, but it's an urban legend, American folklore, and they all usually originate from some real life incident.

Ray smiles.

Some time has passed on the beach and Helen is running around with a sparkler, while Barry is laying on the ground.

Helen -

So by that time, I will just be finishing my two year contract on Guiding Light,

coinciding with your first year as starting quarterback for the steelers...

Barry -

Cowboys!

Helen -

Whatever. Then we can elope in Europe or the Caymans or wherever, where I will

let you impregnate me with the first of three children, before you head off to

rehab and then we can live happily, blah, blah, blah...

Another part of the beach. Julie is walking alone on the beach calling out for

Ray.

Ray (running behind her) -

I'm gonna hook you!!

Julie -

Hey Ray you don't really believe all that crap do you?

Ray -

That's true.

Julie -

Please, it's really a phallic symbol.

Ray -

Oh really?

Julie -

Yeah ultimately castrated. God I'm gonna miss you.

They sit down on the sand.

Ray -

You don't have to, you can always ditch this Boston thing and come to New York

with me.

Julie -

Yeah well we can't all sit in the village coffee house and ramble esoterically

on our laptops. There just isn't enough room.

Ray -

See, no one gets me the way you do.

Julie -

I understand your pain.

Ray -

Precisely.

Julie -

I hate this. I really hate this. You're gonna go off and fall for some head

shaving-black wearing-tattoo covered-body piercing philosophy student.

Ray -

That sounds attractive.

Julie -

And I'll never see you again.

Ray -

Hey, did you know the success rate of high school sweetheart relationships is higher than any other type of relationship?

Julie -

Yeah? Name your source.

Ray then puts his hand on his heart. Julie begins to remove her jacket.

Ray -

Are you sure?

Julie nods yes. Music comes up and the two begin to kiss as they lay on the

ground.

Cut to - Helen and Barry at Barry's car. Barry wants the keys to his car.

Helen -

Okay manmeat give me the keys.

Barry -

Who's car is this? Nobody drives my car but me.

Helen -

I know that baby but the Croaker Queen has to get home now.

Helen then grabs the keys from Barry.

Helen -

Thank you.

Julie and Ray walk up.

Helen -

Hey you two.

Helen tosses the keys to Ray.

Barry -

Give me my fuckin' keys.

Ray -

You're trashed pal.

Helen -

Come ride in the back with me, I'll let you do things to me.

Barry (to Ray) -

Nobody drives my car but me you got that shit smear?

Ray -

Loud and clear. Get in the car.

INT. Barry's car. --- Ray is driving, Julie is in the passenger seat and Barry

and Helen are in the back seat making out. The car shifts and Barry sits up.

Barry -

You can't drive for shit you know that?

Julie (to Barry) -

Can you say Al-co-hol-ic???

Sappy music is playing on the radio.

Barry -

What the hell is this crap?

Barry then puts on some thrash music and climbs out the sunroof while swilling

back the booze and screaming. Barry then drops his bottle on Ray and the car

starts to slide.

Julie -

You asshole.

Ray -

What's wrong with you?

Barry -

WATCH OUT!!!!!!!

The car hits something hard and skids off the road.

Helen -

What was that?

Ray -

I don't know.

Julie -

Is everybody okay?

Helen -

Yeah

Ray -

Maybe it was an animal.

Barry comes down through the sunroof.

Helen -

Oh my god you're bleeding.

Barry wipes the blood of his face.

Barry -

It's not mine.

Ray -

It must have been a dog or something.

Barry (screaming) -

Jesus Christ, my fuckin' car!

They all hop out and look at the smashed up car.

Barry -

Fuck! Can't you see where you're going??

Ray -

Look, it came out of nowhere, I didn't see it.

Julie -

A dog couldn't have done that.

Barry -

Yeah well a fucking deer could.

Ray -

You dropped your bottle, I was just...

Barry (interrupting) -

My dad is gonna freak on my ass.

Helen -

It was an accident; leave him alone.

Julie -

Where is it? If it was a deer then where is it??

Ray -

Maybe it ran off.

Helen -

I hope so, I hope we didn't kill it.

Barry -

Fuck that. Lets go.

Julie sees a mans boot on the side on the road with blood on it.

Julie -

Oh my god.

She runs and picks it up.

Ray -

No way.

Julie -

Oh my god.

Helen -

But I thought...

Ray -

I didn't see it.

Barry -

No there's no way.

Julie -

Oh my god this isn't happening.

Barry runs and gets some flashlights out of the trunk of the car. They begin

looking.

Barry -

You check that side.

Ray -

Yeah.

Barry -

Come on Helen.

Julie screams in horror, there is a body laying on the side of the road.

Ray -

I couldn't see him, I swear.

Helen -

Is he dead?

Ray -

I don't know

Barry -

Check his pulse.

Ray -

No way

Barry -

You're the one who rammed him!

Julie -

Just do it.

Ray goes towards the body and checks his pulse.

Ray -

I think he's dead.

Barry -

SHIT....FUCK!!!

Helen -

Who is he?

Ray -

I can't tell, his face is all messed up.

Barry -

What the hell was he doing out here?

Julie -

We've got to call the police and get an ambulance out here.

Barry -

Hey hey what's your hurry? The guys dead.

Julie -

You're not a doctor you don't make that desicion.

Barry -

Use your brain Julie, we call the police and were fucked.

Julie -

It was an accident.

Ray -

Look, lets think about this a minute.

Julie -

Think about what? Think about what? He was crossing the road in the middle of

the night, okay it was an accident, you weren't drinking or speeding.

Ray -

There's liquor all over the car.

Julie -

But you're sober.

Ray -

They will never believe I was driving.

Barry -

It's my car, they'll nail my ass.

Helen -

That's not true.

Barry -

Are you kidding? Look at me, I'm drunk as shit, I'm fucked.

Helen -

So we'll call the police, just tell them the truth, they'll believe us.

Ray -

It's manslaughter. We're gonna fry no matter who takes the fall.

Barry -

Then we leave right now.

Julie -

No way are you crazy?

Ray -

The grill's busted, there's blood everywhere.

Barry -

We can clean it up, come on.

Julie -

Listen to yourselves, NO, we are going to the police.

Barry (still screaming) -

We don't have time for your shit, you understand? we've got to move fast.

Ray -

Hey, now lets try to stay calm. Focus.

Julie -

Don't you get it? If there's some of him on the car, there's some of the car on

him, their gonna trace it back to you, you're looking at a hit and run.

Barry -

Then we dump the body.

Julie -

You've lost it.

Helen -

Like just pretend we were never here.

Barry -

We could drag him into the water and dump him in, they wouldn't find the fucker

for weeks; by that time all the evidence would be washed away.

Ray -

If they found him at all... The currents are strong, the undertow could carry

him out to sea.

Julie -

I won't be any part of it.

Ray -

Look I'm scared Julie, I'm not like the rest of you, I don't have the family or

the money to get me out of this. Please.

Barry -

This is your future Julie, think about it, college, your scholarship. The guy's

already dead, if we go to the police we're dead too.

A truck starts coming down the road towards them.

Barry -

Fuck.

Helen -

What do we do?

Barry (to Ray) -

Help me.

Barry and Ray pick up the body and carry him over to the other side of the

guardrail.

Helen -

Shit, they're slowing down. Who is it?

Julie -

It's Max.

Barry -

Get rid of him.

Max stops the truck.

Max -

Julie? What you got car trouble?

Max and Julie look over to the guardrail where Barry is pretending he is

vomiting.

Julie -

Actually, it's Barry, he's had way too much to drink and were trying to keep the

up-chuck out of the new car.

Max looks back at the smashed up car.

Max -

Doesn't look so new anymore

Julie -

Yeah, don't drink and drive.

Max -

Daddy's gonna be mad.

Ray comes over to the truck.

Ray -

What can I do for you Max?

Max -

You can wipe that "my shit don't stink grin off your face".

Ray -

Okay Max, will do. Have a goodnight.

Max -

You almost got that rich boy act down Ray.

Ray -

We'll be seeing you Max.

Max -

Yup. Take care Julie.

Max drives away.

EXT. Down at the docks. --- Barry's car is arriving, they get out and open the

trunk and Barry and Ray start dragging the body down to the water.

Barry -

Even if his body washes ashore in the next couple of weeks, he'll be eaten by

crabs and small fish. Maybe we'll get lucky with a shark. Take him to the side.

they start to lower him on to the side of the wharf.

Barry -

Put him down.

Ray -

Easy, that's it.

Barry -

Lets do it.

Julie -

Wait.

Ray -

What?

Julie -

Should we check his wallet and see who he is?

Barry -

Why?

Julie -

I don't know okay, just to know.

Helen -

I don't want to know.

Barry -

Let's just pretend he's some escaped lunatic with a hook for a hand and we're

doing everybody a favor. Ray help me.

Ray -

I don't think I can Barry.

Barry -

Shit, we agreed

Julie -

God, come on Barry it's not too late.

Barry (screaming) -

You, shut up just shut up.

Helen (wanting to get it over with) -

Christ already I'll do it.

Helen and Barry start to move the body towards the water when all of the sudden

the man wakes up and grabs Helen's crown, they all scream and push him in the

water.

Helen (Hysterical) -

My crown, he's got my crown!

Barry jumps in the water after the crown and swims to the bottom where the man

has landed with the crown in his hand. Barry reaches for it and as his hands

touches the crown the mans eyes pop open and Barry beats the crown away from him

while screaming his head off and swims back to the top leaving the man

underwater.

Ray -

Over here.

Barry slams the crown to Helen and walks towards the car.

Ray -

Let's get out of here.

Barry -

We're going home now and never, ever, under any circumstances known to God speak

about this again is that clear? It is now merely a futural therapy bill agreed?

Barry (Screaming) -

Helen??

Helen - I'll never mention it again.

Barry -

We make a pact, right here and now we take this to our grave.

Ray -

Agreed.

Barry -

Julie?

Julie nods her head in agreement.

Barry (livid) -

Don't you nod your head you fuckin say it.

Julie (somber) -

Yeah okay.

Barry runs and grabs Julie by the neck pushing her against the car.

Barry -

We take this to our grave, let me hear it.

Ray -

Let her go Barry!

Barry -

you fucking say it!

Julie -

Okay Barry, we take this to the grave.

Barry gets in the car wet and furious.

Ray (to Julie) -

It will be okay.

Julie begins to cry. And they all get in the car and leave. Camera pans in on

the ground where a silver medallion that says "I love you" is laying.

ONE YEAR LATER

EXT. Julie's college. --- Students are running around on campus.

INT. Julie's dormroom. --- Julie's roommate Deb walks in.

Deb -

Yo, it's time to go.

Julie turns around from her computer revealing that the last year has sure taken

its toll on her.

Deb -

Come on, move your tired ugly ass. girl we're late.

Julie -

I changed my mind, I'm not going.

Deb -

Julie, get your white as death, chalky corpse in the car now. Pause.

Deb -

I said come on. Julie you're going home for the summer and you're going to get a

tan on that pasty pale tail of yours. They both giggle.

Deb -

Let's go.

EXT. - Julie's house - Deb is pulling the car into the driveway. Julie takes her

bag from the backseat.

Deb -

Remember, sun and fun.

Julie -

Yeah.

Deb drives off leaving Julie home, where she doesn't want to be.

Mrs. James -

Julie? Welcome home dear.

Julie turns around to see her mother who she hasn't seen since last summer.

Mrs. James -

I missed you.

INT. - Julie's Kitchen - Julie and her mother are eating.

Mrs. James -

How's the snapper?

Julie just fakes a smile.

Mrs. James -

I really wanted monkfish but it's been a bad season.

Julie sits stonefaced.

Mrs. James -

Are you on drugs?

Julie is surprised by the question.

Julie -

What?

Mrs. James -

I just wanted to surprise you, I want an honest reaction.

Julie -

No. No mom no drugs.

Mrs. James -

Well than what is wrong? I mean you look like death.

Julie -

Yeah well I've had a rough year.

Julie's mom clears the table and Julie gets up and walks towards the living room

looking at old awards and pictures of her father. Julie's mother walks in.

Mrs. James -

You got some mail, a letter came today, not your report card though, that came

last week.

Julie -

Mom I know it looks bad but the summer session went really well.

Mrs. James -

Well it would have to because according to the dean you only have one more

chance.

Julie -

It's not that serious really.

Mrs. James -

What happened to my daughter? I mean you went away and you don't call and you

don't visit.

Mrs. James begins to walk out of the room.

Mrs. James -

Your father must be turning over in his grave.

Julie begins to cry as she opens the plainly marked envelope so see the words

written boldly in black marker "I KNOW WHAT YOU DID LAST SUMMER" she looks at it

terrified as she begins to cry harder.

Julie (Holding back the tears) -

Who sent this? There's no postmark or return address.

Mrs. James -

Your guess is as good as mine why what does it say?

Julie -

Nothing.

Julie runs up the stairs to her bedroom. She sits on a sofa looking at the

letter all night long wondering who could have sent it. She hears a noise outside and runs to shut her window and curtains. She is scared.

EXT. - The streets of Southport --- Julie's car drives up to the store named

Shivers.

INT. - Shivers --- Back entrance Elsa is talking to some guys unloading

merchandise. A man drops one of the boxes.

Elsa -

Guys, easy. It's called glass, it breaks.

She walks into the main part of the store greeting some shoppers and begins to

arrange some things. Julie walks into the store.

Elsa -

Well well look what the cat drug in.

Julie -

Elsa, hi. You know what? I need to talk to Helen and I was wondering if you

could give me her New York number?

Elsa -

Her New York number?

Julie -

Yeah I need to talk to her.

Elsa -

Fact check Julie, Helen doesn't have a New York number, if you need to speak to

her I suggest you go to women's fragrances, 10 feet to your left.

Camera pans off to show Helen who is arranging some bottles of perfume.

Elsa -

Frightening isn't it?

Helen looks up and sees the friend that she hasn't seen in a year and smiles.

Helen -

Julie?

Julie walks over to her.

Helen -

When did you get home?

Julie -

Yesterday.

Helen -

It's good to see you.

Julie -

What happened to New York?

Helen -

I went for a while and it didn't really work out.

Julie pulls the letter from her pocket.

Julie -

Somebody sent this to me.

A look of fear crosses Helen's face.

Helen -

Oh my God.

Julie -

Somebody knows, Helen.

Helen -

How?

Julie -

I don't know.

Helen -

Julie we were so careful.

Julie -

Were we? Were we? What if somebody saw us? What if somebody else was there that

night?

Helen -

Who? It's been a year.

Julie -

I don't know.

Helen -

Has Barry seen this?

EXT. - Barry's lawn --- Helen and Julie are walking towards the house.

Helen -

Do you ever see Barry at school?

Julie -

It's a big campus. Are you sure he came back?

Helen -

Saw his car the other day at the gym.

Julie -

Did you guys break up?

Barry walks out on to the patio not pleased at seeing the two of them again.

Barry (not excited to see them)-

Hey. What are you two doing here?

Helen -

Hi Bare.

EXT. - Barry's patio --- they are discussing the letter.

Barry -

This is nothing. I know what you did last summer? Oooh, what a crock of shit.

Helen -

We need help.

Barry -

Yeah I'll say, you know what? You guys should check out a mirror once in a

while, you two look like shit run over twice.

Helen -

You're a prick.

Julie -

We can't just ignore it.

Barry -

Come one Julie, how do you know this is even related? You did a lot of things

last summer.

Julie -

Yeah well only one murder comes to mind.

Barry is extremely pissed that she mentions that night again.

Barry -

You shut the hell up! We didn't murder anyone.

Julie -

He was still alive when we dumped him in the water.

Helen -

Do we have to rehash this? It was an accident, the guy was in the middle of the

road.

Julie -

His name was David Egan.

Barry -

Who?

Julie -

David Egan. He was found three weeks after we.... his body was caught in a

shrimp net not far from millers dock. It was in the paper, I think the police

called it an accidental drowning. You can call it an accident all you want but

he died because of us that's certain.

Barry -

What about Ray? Have you showed this letter to him? What does he think?

Julie -

I haven't seen Ray since last summer, we broke up and last I heard he was

working up north.

Barry -

Okay let's supposed someone was there that night, why send the letter one year

later? Probably some crack fucking around....Max.

Julie -

Max? You think?

Barry -

Who else? He was there.

EXT. - Fish Plant --- Julie, Helen and Barry are walking towards the building.

Barry -

You two wait here.

Julie -

What are you gonna do?

Barry -

I know what I'm doing.

INT. - Fish Plant --- Max is working with some lobster pots. He notices Barry

walking in.

Max -

Well go figure, I was just thinking to myself what ever happened to that Barry

Cox?

Barry (being very polite) -

Hey Max. Hey listen can we talk for a sec? In private?

Max -

Oh what this isn't private enough for you?

Barry smirks and walks out back and Max follows him.

Max -

Yeah what?

Barry then grabs Max and pushes him into a block of ice holding him down.

Barry -

Look you shit we got your little letter.

Max -

What the hell are you talking about?

Barry -

Don't fuck with me Max, you saw us that night.

Max -

What the fuck are you on huh?

Barry grabs a large fish hook that was sitting on a block of ice and holds it up

to Maxs face.

Max -

Jesus Christ.

Barry -

Listen I'm gonna say this once, I'll fucking kill your ass, I got no problem

with that...

Max -

Oh get the fuck off me.

Barry -

You understand me?

Max -

Get off of me.

Max struggles with Barry and Barry cuts Max's arm with the hook and then walks

away putting the hook back where he got it from. Max is laying on the floor

wondering what just happened. He gets up and he is angry and grabs the hook

yelling at Barry who is leaving.

Max -

Mother fucker. Don't you test me mother fucker, I'll call the cops on your

college quarterback ass.

EXT. - Back on the street --- Barry is walking out where Julie and Helen have

been waiting.

Julie -

So did he admit to the letter?

Barry keeps walking.

Barry -

He won't bother you anymore.

Helen -

What did you do?

Barry -

I took care of it okay?

Julie -

How?

Barry -

I scared the shit out of him alright?

Stepping up from out of a boat is Ray. The old group of friends are reunited.

Barry -

Well I'll be damned.

Ray (to Julie) -

Hi.

Barry -

So Ray grew up to be a fisherman huh?

Ray -

Yeah, almost a year now, I work on that one over there on the end.

Barry does not look where Ray has just pointed.

Barry -

That's nice. Have a nice life guys, I'm out of here. Barry leaves.

Ray (to Julie) -

You got a minute?

Helen doesn't want to be intrude.

Helen -

I gotta get back to work, call me, we can get together.

Julie -

Yeah okay.

Helen leaves Ray and Julie alone to talk.

Julie -

We need to talk.

INT. - Fish Plant --- Ray and Julie are walking in discussing the letter.

Ray -

You think Max sent it?

Julie -

Barry does. I don't know.

Ray -

Well, you know how Max feels about you guys, look he's probably just screwing

around, he doesn't have much else to do you know?

Julie -

Yeah maybe.

EXT. - On the wharf --- Ray and Julie are talking while he is working.

Ray -

So, how's school?

Julie -

So you're a fisherman?

Ray -

Yeah prophecy fulfilled right? I've become my father.

Julie -

I thought you didn't know your dad?

Ray -

Ah he worked the boats, that's all I do know about him. Pause.

Ray -

Look I thought a lot about last summer, I know you hold me responsible for what

happened.

Julie -

I don't hold you responsible, no, I'm responsible for my own actions and I don't

blame you. But I don't want to know you either.

She runs away from a confused Ray leaving him there all alone.

INT. - Fish Plant - Max is cooking lobsters. he burns his finger and goes to get

gloves. He sees a shadow through the steam from the boiling water and looks

closer to see what it is and sees someone in a black slicker coming towards him

and then the hook goes through his throat and dragging him across the table.

EXT - SouthPort street --- Barry is pulling up to the South Port Muscle.

INT. - Southport Muscle. --- Barry is working out, punching and kickboxing.

INT. - Locker Room --- Barry is taking tape off his hands and sees a shadow.

Barry -

Hello??

INT. - Shower --- Barry is showering after his workout, he sees a shadow go past

the door.

Barry -

Hello???

INT. - Locker Room --- Barry sees a polaroid picture sticking out of his locker,

he looks at it, it's a picture of his car which is parked outside with "I Know"

written on the picture. He looks in his locked and his jacket is missing.

Barry -

My fucking jacket!

He quickly gets dressed and runs out into the lobby where an old man working is

reading the newspaper.

Barry -

Who else is here? Anybody else working out?

Worker -

Just you and me pal.

Barry runs outdoor to see his car is being backed out of the parking lot, he

chases after it.

Barry -

Hey! Hey! Fucker.

The car backs into the end of the street with Barry chasing it, the car stops,

Barry is looking directly at it.

Barry -

Max, you're fucking dead.

The headlights of the car come on and starts speeding towards Barry, he starts

to run away but the car is right behind him. He is backed up against an old

deserted building with nowhere to go, he is looking at the car trying to think

of something to do, the car pauses and then rams into Barry who flips up onto

the windshield and the car pushes him through the building. The car stops and

someone in a slicker gets out and is looking down at an injured Barry. Barry is

screaming for help.

Barry -

Help me!!! help me!! somebody. What do you want????

The slicker-clad madman pulls out a big fishing hook.

Barry -

I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I swear we didn't mean it , please don't.